{"id":86,"date":"2013-11-17T18:13:31","date_gmt":"2013-11-17T23:13:31","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/feedback.commons.hwdsb.on.ca\/?p=86"},"modified":"2013-11-17T18:13:31","modified_gmt":"2013-11-17T23:13:31","slug":"providing-feedback-using-success-criteria","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/feedback.commons.hwdsb.on.ca\/?p=86","title":{"rendered":"Providing Feedback using Success Criteria"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>For this Literacy unit, Ben and I had the students write a Relate\/Reflect response every 2-3 days. This provided many opportunities for the students to receive feedback and apply the feedback to their next response. Here are some pictures of what that looked like:<br \/>\n<a href=\"https:\/\/s3.amazonaws.com\/hwdsbcommons\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/3142\/2013\/11\/2013-11-13-16.25.15.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone size-medium wp-image-87\" alt=\"2013-11-13 16.25.15\" src=\"https:\/\/s3.amazonaws.com\/hwdsbcommons\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/3142\/2013\/11\/2013-11-13-16.25.15-223x300.jpg\" width=\"223\" height=\"300\" srcset=\"https:\/\/hwdsbcommons.s3.amazonaws.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/3142\/2013\/11\/2013-11-13-16.25.15-223x300.jpg 223w, https:\/\/hwdsbcommons.s3.amazonaws.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/3142\/2013\/11\/2013-11-13-16.25.15.jpg 764w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 223px) 100vw, 223px\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>We also worked on Writing in Role. \u00a0This is the Success Criteria for that and a sample of the feedback students received.<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/s3.amazonaws.com\/hwdsbcommons\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/3142\/2013\/11\/2013-11-13-16.26.29.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone size-medium wp-image-88\" alt=\"2013-11-13 16.26.29\" src=\"https:\/\/s3.amazonaws.com\/hwdsbcommons\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/3142\/2013\/11\/2013-11-13-16.26.29-300x223.jpg\" width=\"300\" height=\"223\" srcset=\"https:\/\/hwdsbcommons.s3.amazonaws.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/3142\/2013\/11\/2013-11-13-16.26.29-300x223.jpg 300w, https:\/\/hwdsbcommons.s3.amazonaws.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/3142\/2013\/11\/2013-11-13-16.26.29.jpg 1024w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 300px) 100vw, 300px\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>This is a sample of a Relate\/Reflect Response and the feedback students received. \u00a0Every student received feedback, even when they achieved level 4s.<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/s3.amazonaws.com\/hwdsbcommons\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/3142\/2013\/11\/2013-11-13-16.27.26.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone size-medium wp-image-89\" alt=\"2013-11-13 16.27.26\" src=\"https:\/\/s3.amazonaws.com\/hwdsbcommons\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/3142\/2013\/11\/2013-11-13-16.27.26-300x223.jpg\" width=\"300\" height=\"223\" srcset=\"https:\/\/hwdsbcommons.s3.amazonaws.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/3142\/2013\/11\/2013-11-13-16.27.26-300x223.jpg 300w, https:\/\/hwdsbcommons.s3.amazonaws.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/3142\/2013\/11\/2013-11-13-16.27.26.jpg 1024w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 300px) 100vw, 300px\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>During our unit, students discussed the novel we were reading (Hunger Games). \u00a0Students were in groups of 5-6 and had to discuss 2 questions (that they had time to prepare). \u00a0Each group recorded their discussions using Educreations with an ipad. \u00a0I was then able to listen to their discussions and provide some feedback. \u00a0I sat with a group each discussion to help bump up their thinking and discussion.<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/s3.amazonaws.com\/hwdsbcommons\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/3142\/2013\/11\/2013-11-13-16.29.24.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone size-medium wp-image-90\" alt=\"2013-11-13 16.29.24\" src=\"https:\/\/s3.amazonaws.com\/hwdsbcommons\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/3142\/2013\/11\/2013-11-13-16.29.24-300x223.jpg\" width=\"300\" height=\"223\" srcset=\"https:\/\/hwdsbcommons.s3.amazonaws.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/3142\/2013\/11\/2013-11-13-16.29.24-300x223.jpg 300w, https:\/\/hwdsbcommons.s3.amazonaws.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/3142\/2013\/11\/2013-11-13-16.29.24.jpg 1024w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 300px) 100vw, 300px\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/s3.amazonaws.com\/hwdsbcommons\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/3142\/2013\/11\/2013-11-13-16.31.48.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone size-medium wp-image-91\" alt=\"2013-11-13 16.31.48\" src=\"https:\/\/s3.amazonaws.com\/hwdsbcommons\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/3142\/2013\/11\/2013-11-13-16.31.48-300x223.jpg\" width=\"300\" height=\"223\" srcset=\"https:\/\/hwdsbcommons.s3.amazonaws.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/3142\/2013\/11\/2013-11-13-16.31.48-300x223.jpg 300w, https:\/\/hwdsbcommons.s3.amazonaws.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/3142\/2013\/11\/2013-11-13-16.31.48.jpg 1024w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 300px) 100vw, 300px\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/s3.amazonaws.com\/hwdsbcommons\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/3142\/2013\/11\/2013-11-13-16.32.32.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone size-medium wp-image-92\" alt=\"2013-11-13 16.32.32\" src=\"https:\/\/s3.amazonaws.com\/hwdsbcommons\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/3142\/2013\/11\/2013-11-13-16.32.32-300x223.jpg\" width=\"300\" height=\"223\" 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